verbalizing lapses in the brain

This shoot is from Landscape of Emotions Workshop by Manny Librodo in Polomolok.  Workshop was two days with three different sets.  The pool sequence is part two of the first set we did where Kharu was wearing fresh make up and a cream ball gown.

I’m not very happy with my takes in the pool. I’m still finding ways to improve it and so far, I’ve hit a blank wall.  So please take a look at my photo and suggest what is lacking why the picture doesn’t quite look interesting (?) a little help please.  I find it a little too cluttered or maybe it’s too white?  My favorite set is the colorful one.

Comments (18)

  1. Faust said on 18-04-2011

    another apt title for this will be “water therapy sequence” for a spa or anything.. cheers..
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  2. kathy said on 18-04-2011

    very nice imohang theme ley :)

    • 13thWiTCH said on 18-04-2011

      thank you kath. si manny librodo ang nagbuot ana sa pool sequence og sa uban pang theme sa shoot :)

  3. Tessa said on 18-04-2011

    love it te! :) gwapo kaayo ang pagkakuha :) grabeh na jud ang career. wish u the best sa imong photography… ganahan kaau ko :)

    I don’t see anything wrong with the photo until you said na dili ka satisfied… I think a little more color should do the trick. I think it’s because of the brightness? The model look pale… but I still find it beautiful. sobra lang tingali ang brightness. ganahan ko atong isa nimo ka photo, tong batch 1 ani… crisp bright colors. well defined ang lines ato… kani siya, murag nagblend ang model sa iyang background… pero kung mao jud na ang gusto iportray sa photos ok sad. dili kaayo mapansin ang model sa photos… pero mas naglutaw sa third photo…

    ambot lang ha… pero opinion lang nako toh. :D best of luck and more power :)
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  5. catherinism said on 19-04-2011

    yeh, puti lng kaayo, ug murag off lng ng yellow ug white nga flowers sa iya dunggan. siguro kung mas colorful na nga flower, murag wala pud sya sa water but duh gwapo uy! buot! wa nay reklamo, ikaw na jud na, di na mabangbang :D taas kaayo akong expectations sa imo, sunod sa air na pud hehe. ayaw na paghadlok hadlok :D
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    • 13thWiTCH said on 22-04-2011

      heheh thanks for the ego boost pretty. wala lang kulabaan lang gud. and yous till owe me an avant garde shoot! tagem. pangandam na!

  6. Bill said on 19-04-2011

    You always take great pictures Leah. I think you are a very talented and beautiful lady. I know you are going to be a big success my friend.
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  7. Jace said on 20-04-2011

    oustanding! i so love the concept… super galing…

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  9. Felipe Sparks said on 25-01-2012

    Beautiful pictures. The colors jump out especially. Well done.

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