Manny Librodo Style (Set 2, Water Sequence)

This shoot is from Landscape of Emotions Workshop by Manny Librodo in Polomolok.  Workshop was two days with three different sets.  The pool sequence is part two of the first set we did where Kharu was wearing fresh make up and a cream ball gown.

I’m not very happy with my takes in the pool. I’m still finding ways to improve it and so far, I’ve hit a blank wall.  So please take a look at my photo and suggest what is lacking why the picture doesn’t quite look interesting (?) a little help please.  I find it a little too cluttered or maybe it’s too white?  My favorite set is the colorful one.